Don’t Be So…

Don’t be so… she started,Party2
then lost her way,
to random thoughts.

And upon returning
found him gone
as if those three words
were enough.

14 Responses to Don’t Be So…

  1. Mauro Metallo says:

    A real gem: I love concise and meaningful thoughts, expecially if written in verse…

  2. davecandoit says:

    Thank you, Mauro. I’ll try not to.

  3. aswirly says:

    I keep coming back to this. So much unsaid makes it so powerful.

  4. davecandoit says:

    Thanks, I’ll add you to mine.

  5. y says:

    reminds me of this one i wrote recently:

    as you may notice from the overall collection, i am the opposite – i find it easier to write more concisely than lengthily…(smile) thank you so much for sharing these!

    • davecandoit says:

      Boy that was a great poem. Nicely done. Me, I sometimes write very concise and then find I write long stuff. I usually over-write and then edit back to something more sharp.

      • y says:

        i, on the other hand, time myself, and write off-the-cuff. when i find that i’m going back to change too many of the words, i just slap my time stamp and move on – because that would be tomorrow’s writing entry (smile). shh, don’t tell anyone!

  6. davecandoit says:

    LOL, your secret’s safe with me.

  7. Vicki says:

    Nice Dave. I have a hard time writing long things. Funny that eh?

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